Thursday, September 13, 2012

100 Word challenge - Totara

Here are two of the stories from Totara (when I was relieving in their class) for the 100 word challenge. This is a website that sets a chalenge for the week. This week's task was to write 5 sentences about this picture. Here are the stories from Nick and Bailey.

Nick
One day a lady went pushing her pram and a wheel started wobbling. She started to think it was broken so she went to check it. It rolled down the hill into a pond but a man jumped over like a cheetah and saved the pram. The man said that the water was cold.

Bailey
There was a gardner making his flowers perfect. He was thinking about the roses because he was worried. He was feeling worried because he wanted to win a prize to Hawai. He was gardening as fast as a leopard running. The roses were as red as lava!

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